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110. It has been estimated that the annual cost to the United States of illiteracy in lost industrial output and tax revenues is at least $20 billion a year. (A) the annual cost to the United States of illiteracy in lost industrial output and tax revenues is at least $20 billion a year (B) the annual cost of illiteracy to the United States is at least $20 billion a year because of lost industrial output and tax revenues (C) illiteracy costs the United States at least $20 billion a year in lost industrial output and tax revenues (D) $20 billion a year in lost industrial output and tax revenues is the annual cost to the United States of illiteracy (E)lost industrial output and tax revenues cost the United States at least $20 billion a year because of illiteracy In choices A, B, and D, the combined use of annual and a year is redundant. Choices A, D, and E are awkward and confused because other constructions intrude within the phrase cost... of illiteracy: for greatest clarity, cost should be followed immediately by a phrase (e.g., of illiteracy ) that identifies the nature of the cost. Choice E is particularly garbled in reversing cause and effect, saying that it is lost output and revenues rather than illiteracy that costs the United States over $20 billion a year. Choice B is wordy and awkward, and idiom requires in rather than because of to introduce a phrase identifying the constituents of the $20 billion loss. Concise, logically worded, and idiomatic, choice C is best. 这题的B答案,如果没有前面的annual是不是就对了?
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OG写得很清楚in/because of的区别;此外,the cost of illitercy不及动词表达明确,动词强调了因果关系,而名次结构无法表达这种关系。所以,即便B的阿annual去掉,也不对。
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谢谢hswang赐教


偶还有一个问题顺便请教


be credited with和credit to里面,是不是前者的credited是形容词,后者的是动词,所以后面更的介词不同呢?

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credit和with/to连用,可以作动词,也可以作形容词。


比如be credit with/to doing 作形容词


credit A with/to B 作动词
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