[转帖]V19的作文摸版

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V19的作文摸版


两次都拿了5.5分，即使g友们不说，也打算自动来贴摸版的（其实是前面大牛的摸版七拼八凑的，别见笑呀！）

Issue

The issue of whether… is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their respective angles. In my opinion, however, I agree that … do not agree that…. My view will be greatly confirmed by the following discussion.

The first argument that can be presented to develop my position is that … A good example may be found in the case that… Under this circumstance/ therefore, it is obvious that…

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. / consider this statement to be wrong. The reason is not far to seek:…
To illustrate, let us consider that … Hence, another equally important aspect is that…

Admittedly, it may be true that… in some conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to …, When the advantage and disadvantage of X and Y are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious.

Consequently, due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to FORM an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that…, because…

Argument:

In this argument, the author concludes that.. To support his conclusion, the author points out that… In addition, he reasons that… This argument is unconvincing for several reasons.(第二次考时v19把这句观点句给忘了，不知为什么还得5。5分)

In the first place, ….

In the second place,…

Finally,…

Since the author commits the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to consider the whole situation comprehensively, his ideas should not be adopted. The conclusion would be strengthened if he
(注， argument 的摸版很灵活，推荐AA的七宗罪)

再罗嗦两句，个人意见，考场上尽可能罗嗦，能用两句话别用一句话，不怕重复（别听孙员的鬼话，考场上没时间想换一个词表达同一个意思），不用背例子（v19一个也没背），issue最好有反驳的那点，argument最好有第三点，哪怕两句话。还有末段原因的总结，别忘了使用粘贴功能呀！


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