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怎么改??? Since the adbent of rock music in the 1950's,the popular music of the United States has become a significant musical influence around world.(significant不是该用副词来修饰musical吗?)

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plan-->plans(可数单数要有冠词)
fine art-->fine arts(one of the most + 名词复述)
pressure can-->pressure that can(原因说不清)
sensitive to light--〉不知道
around world-->arournd the world(the 不能省略)
Indiscriminately --> 去掉ly(dumping是名词形式)

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以下是引用elites在2005-5-17 20:07:00的发言: plan-->plans(可数单数要有冠词) fine art-->fine arts(one of the most + 名词复述) pressure can-->pressure that can(原因说不清) sensitive to light--〉不知道 around world-->arournd the world(the 不能省略) Indiscriminately --> 去掉ly(dumping是名词形式)

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