og12-95 求教

Sunfisher006

95.The peaks of a mountain range, acting like rocks in a streambed, produce ripples in the air flowing over them; the resulting flow pattern, with crests and troughs that remain stationary although the airthat forms them is moving rapidly, are known as "standing waves."

(A)crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, are

(B)crests and troughs that remain stationary although they are formed by rapidly moving air, are

(C)crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, is

(D)stationary crests and troughs although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, are

(E)stationary crests and troughs although they are formed by rapidly moving air, is

答案：C
我选的E

解释是： The use of the active voice in the verbs of the subordinate clauses provides greater clarity of meaning.
但我认为E更简洁，求指教~

chaseconsult

with  the crests and troughs that remains stationary although the air that form them is moving rapidly." 是独立主格结构做插入语 with+n.+名词的修饰语，其中 that remains stationary although the air that form them is moving rapidly是the crests and troughs 的修饰语。

E选项中修饰语with  the stationary crests and troughs  although they are formed by rapidly moving air不正确的独立主格结构，  although they are formed by rapidly moving air没有办法修饰crests and troughs

leslielu

plus,
they 指代不明

with二

寻找be动词对应，剩下CE，比较。E选项with “XXXX”是更简洁，但是读起来不对，with后面飞出来一个although来转折，前面说的pattern，你既然以with打头，是不是少了个动词来呼应呢？

Sunfisher006

oh，这样啊~

xiaomakunkun

还不能到看简洁的问题上，因为remain是不能乱扔的词，例如 sth remain stationary一样东西保持不动跟  stationary sth不动的某东西，不是一个意思。

Sunfisher006

是不是stationary crests and troughs 比crests and troughs that remain stationary 简洁啊？

xiaomakunkun

在原句逻辑意思正确的情况下尽量保持，然后保持原有意思这一条不要用来优先判断

Sunfisher006

感谢感谢~
是不是要尽量和原句保持相同啊？

xiaomakunkun

个人觉得E主要改变句子意思，原句说although air怎么怎么样，而E说although carests and troughs是怎样形成的，另外E还是用了被动，更把原句的remain这样有含义的系动词扔了不好