请大家帮我解释一道语法题可以吗?为什么要选择

dongziyuan

Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

 

1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.
2. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.
3. Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents, are the more likely to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as adolescents.
4. Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.
5. Rather than permissive parents, the children of authoritative parents are the more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent.

麻烦牛人帮我分析一下这道题,答案是A.为什么其他的错误呢?

tenkiong

B  Authoritative parents who ...后面全是定语从句，没有谓语句子不完整

C  Children ...are...,have..., and to be... 多谓语，and平行结构使用不当。

D  are likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent . and 平行结构使用不当。

E   are likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent 。还是and连接的部分不能这么用。

简单的办法是．．．明显Ａ顺嘴．．．

HeenG

同问

pocahonta

同问！！！