大全508 What's wrong with E? (885 sec 2-7)

nocturnetian

508. Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(A) Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.
(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising.
(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients’ exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

答案C 。同意。
不过，E错在哪儿？被动？broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines 有修饰主语主语之嫌？

zhangxirui87

对，就是顾尾不顾头

shuishuiles

有新问题

as well as athletes exercising本来在原句中是做插入成分的，省去也不会影响句子原意，但C选项将其提出来改成the exercise of both heart patients and athletes，变成了句子不可缺少的成分，按照白勇讲的，这是改变原句的合理意思呀！

那位NN出来解释一下？

wall_streets

除了不平衡错误，A和B选项中，as well as athletes exercising结构在位置上有没有错误?

即：A中as well as athletes exercising除了可以和前面的heart patients’ exercise并列，有没有可能和前面的Monitoring heart patients’ exercise并列？同作主语？

请NN指教！

nikema

我刚刚做也做错了这道题，上来找答案。真的是一语惊醒梦中人啊！

nocturnetian

不好意思，典型“顾尾不顾头”----不是女孩子的一贯作风呀。

felicitymq

athletes exercising and heart patients’ exercise 不平衡呀