prep-110

susanyakis

110. Even though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were disappointing artistically as well as technically, Olive Fremstad (1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten by opera aficionados.

A. though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were

B. though her career was cut short while in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she made

C. as her career had been cut short when she was in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she had made

D. with her career having been cut short when she was in her prime, and the fifteen recordings she made were

E. with her career cut short while in her prime, and that the fifteen recordings she made were

A: correct

B: while不能直接加介词短语

C: had been过去完成没必要；with后面不能接句子

D: even with错

E: even with错

请问A中and前是不是应该加逗号??

greatvampirer

“必错”“永远错”这样的说法恐怕才是不妥的。

while+prep短语的用法是对的，但要注意主句主语是什么。

例如：They wanted a place to stay while in Paris. while后面省略了句子的主谓they were。

在这题中B是错在while...省略的主语（应该是she）和前面主语（her career）逻辑上不一致，所以错。

在这题中B是错在while...省略的主语（应该是she）和前面主语（her career）逻辑上不一致，所以错。

with的用法：with/without + S1 + doing/based on/介词短语/adj./noun + SVO构成的复合结构（独立主格）作状语，在句尾修饰前面的句子或动作，例如：

She walked back to the bus stop, with him following her.

OG-25

The end of the eighteenth century saw the emergence of prize-stock breeding, with individual bulls and

cows receiving awards, fetching unprecedented prices, and exciting enormous interest whenever they were put on show.

susanyakis

还有解释说with +one+ doing必错，有依据么？