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Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal
Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society,

based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the
harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild
and domestic resources.
􀂃 (B) based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and
beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the
exploitation of
􀂃 (C) and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and
beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of
􀂃 (D) and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as
corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and
exploiting
􀂃 (E) and they based it on their cultivating such crops like
corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and
they exploited
想问下OG后面说A选项第二项破坏平行,哪里破坏了啊?
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cultivating和exploiting是动词性动名词;而the harvesting就变成了名词性

动名词;二者不可平行~

看Manhattan关于平行的那两章,有讲到这个的~

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A其实看到'such。。。。。like‘就不用看了,GMAC的题和书面语法中绝对不会这么表达。而且动名词之前一般加冠词修饰,A中明显就是2楼说的情况,所以。。。。

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简单动名词不能和抽象名词平行,只能改为复杂动名词才能和抽象名词平行。
cultivation 是抽象名词,exploiting不能和其平行,必须改为the exploiting of ...

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