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OG 11 Q102

102. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

OG中答案B中解释:"Phrase carefully coordinating...illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it (book illustrations); Potter, not the illustrations, did the coordinating; awkward and unclear"

可否解释一下为什么coordinate with中间不能放them,是不是coordinate with是习惯用语来的,中间不加东西的?

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(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix

Potter.这种情况下,按字面意思会把coordinating的施动者理解为之前与其最近的名词illustrations.

Just my personal point.

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