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The nation’s three military academies have seen a dramatic rise in applications, one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies.

(A) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies

(B) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs that have increased at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting

(C) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, private colleges that increased their tuition costs, and recruiting improvements by the academies

(D) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs increasing at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting（A）

(E) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting

请问各位牛牛，为什么选A，考点是什么？我做到第三遍还是觉得B好，郁闷！

先在这谢谢各位了。

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平行结构

B错在 1. tuition costs that have increased at private colleges 不简洁 2. academies improving their recruiting 与前面的结构不平行.

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这题的考点很清楚，对称：形式对称 ＋ 含义对称 ，形式对称是指：都得是名词短语，含义对称则指：都得是表动态名词短语。

考点虽很清楚，但我做了两次也是错，我的迷惑是：到底怎么判定increasing tuition costs 和 academies improving their recruiting，谁是名词短语，谁是分词？请NN 指导。