A中"that could eventually propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two or help"做定语修饰a new type of jet engine ;propel和help并列。 定语太长后置。 B中could和have the capability of 重复,propering和to help不对称 c中able to这个形容词短语使用很不恰当 d中改变句子重心(重心是测试)而且propel和helping不并列 e中could和have the capability of 重复,改变句子重心, 当然,987A中within two后面肯定少了一个hours 请指正!
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