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the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on

people, would be extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess.

个人认为and those ... on people 是插入语,and 表示其额外的有巨大影响的effects

,可以理解为补充说明的none-essential modifier; 如果去掉and, those that ....

修饰前面的obvious effects, 成了同位语,改变了语法逻辑

还有B选项错误,并非一个简洁,简洁不简洁只是一个prefer的偏好问题。
真正的语法问题,依我看是:A选项:the most obvious effects would be extremes

of temperature,precipitation, and storminess;B选项:the effects would be

those impacting the most on people——很明显的看到修饰成分变主体,主体内容变

为修饰成分,这种毫无理由的变化,是不合理的。。。。。

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