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标题: princeton的一道语法 [打印本页]

作者: 1stzhang    时间: 2003-3-20 19:13     标题: princeton的一道语法

Two weeks ago, a teacher designed a math curriculum to address (the deficiencies in basic maths skills that she expected to encounter based on her students' poor performance on previous tests.)
E:deficiencies excepted to be encounted in the basic math skills in her students' poor perfoemance.

哪个更好呢?
作者: tongxun    时间: 2003-3-20 19:21

我认为A比较好。
作者: 1stzhang    时间: 2003-3-21 12:04

请tongxun解释
作者: 1stzhang    时间: 2003-3-21 23:14

答案选A
作者: tongxun    时间: 2003-3-21 23:31

1、in her students' poor perfoemance.与A中based on比较,后者较贴切,表达更准确、清晰。

2、deficiencies最好直接跟(缺乏的)领域。这样表达比较清晰。
作者: 1stzhang    时间: 2003-3-22 12:41

谢谢tongxun




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