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(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured 是一个ETS称为run-on的结构,精简后是Aho held festivals, they featured。2个句子不能这样并列
不太明白,什么是RUN-ON结构呢?
请NN们指点~
不间断句子(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“there are many ways.”以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为:
there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或:
there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world
摘自kaplan Grammer Ref. guide
RUN-ON SENTENCES
When a sentence consists of more than one clause, those clauses must be joined properly. It is never acceptableto hook two clauses together with a comma, as the “sentence” below does. That’s called a run-on sentence.
Wrong: Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869, he planned to teach classical philology.
There are a number of acceptable ways to fix a run-on.
1. Make two separate sentences:
Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869. He planned to teach classical philology.
2a. Change the comma to a semicolon:
Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869; he planned to teach classical philology.
2b. Join the clauses with a semicolon and a transition word such as however or therefore.
Nietzsche planned to teach classical philology; therefore, he moved to Basel in 1869.
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