GWD 21-27
The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.
A. to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
B. to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
C. is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
D. is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
E. is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing
居然选d,不能理解啊~
b\c which 就近修饰world,
a the length 与it weighs不能用and连接,不能并列
e weighing 修饰 computer,改变句子意思。
b\c which 就近修饰world,
a the length 与it weighs不能用and连接,不能并列
e weighing 修饰 computer,改变句子意思。
a中代词指代有问题。it 俩指的不一样。
d中的it claim 按成插入成分,不过偶记得要前后加逗号的, 待我查查清楚。
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