Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants.
A.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
B.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress
C.According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
D.Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed
E.Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing
句子结构是这样 Records…indicate that… women collaborated… with which they… and that this robe…
According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
这里面and前后的两个部分平行，后面的还原之后即是：a new woolen robe that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants.
不可原谅的重复。。。作者: Stefaniezhu 时间: 2012-10-28 06:27
如果原文是说根据records，Athenian women collaborated呢？ 就是说雅典妇女每年根据古雅典的记录聚集到一起织东西呢？作者: julia_juer 时间: 2012-11-1 06:43
１，句首主谓搭配错误：如Ａ，Ｂ，年轻的雅典女人ｂａｓｅｄ．．．
是错误的。
２，ｅａｃｈ ｙｅａｒ用过去完成时是错误的，如Ｅ中，一般过去时是对
的。
３，ａ．．．robe that they used to dress：ｕｓｅｄ ｔｏ 本身是个
固定搭配，表示过去经常做的事情，现在不做了。用在这里，容易使意思含
糊，所以舍弃这个结构，如在Ｃ当中，另外，ａｃｃｏｒｄｉｎｇ ｔｏ没
问题的。作者: avenue5th 时间: 2012-11-5 06:24
C果然tricky，简单重复没看出来。。
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