Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
A.
Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
B.
Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, they cost less,
C.
Minivans carry as many as seven passengers, in comparison with most sport utility vehicles, and have a lower cost, they
D.
Minivans, carrying as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
E.
Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles the cost is lower, and they
这道题目看完讨论,我彻底晕了,到底选什么呢,A OR D? 为什么?我个人比较倾向与D.
谢谢作者: instinctwu 时间: 2012-9-17 20:40
我认为A是对的
D 有两个错误, 一个是改变了原句的中心,把carry as many as seven passengers变成了附属成分,二是句子的修饰成分排列笨拙,正常的语序应该是Carrying as many as seven passengers, Minivans, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less...
A选项的争论点是 passengers后面的and到底对不对, 这个句子应该分为两个部分,前一部分是Minivans carry as many as seven passengers 后一部分是 compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride. 这两个部分表达意思不同,前一部分是一个简单叙述, 后一个部分表达的是比较,此部分的几个并列的动词结构全部用了比较级.因此and是用来连接两个不同的部分,并不是作为动词的并列结构出现的.作者: sunnybyy 时间: 2012-9-25 06:20
我同意a
因为在做og的时候
做过统计~~主语后面有两个修饰的状语通常是错的
同一楼上的看法，d应该把主语放在修饰的中间Carrying as many as seven passengers, Minivans, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less...作者: Netherlanders 时间: 2012-10-12 06:42
ompare with的用法 83、91
1)compared with直接跟在逗号后面可以修饰逗号前面名词短语的核心词：
Example：
In the United States, while the number of foreign-born residents and their children is higher than ever, the percentage of the population they represent is not; in 1910 this group made up 35 percent of the population, compared with 20 percent in 2000.
2) Compared with也可以修饰前面整个分句，compared with后面的名词与主语比较：
Example:
Today, more than 43 percent of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35 percent a decade ago.
One baby in four is now born to a mother aged thirty or older, compared with just one in six in 1975.
3) as compared to/with中as指代前面整句的核心含义：
A recent review of pay scales indicates that, on average, CEO's now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio in 1980.
按照D的选项，compared with 修饰的应该是seven passagers（compare with的第一种用法），显然不符合原句的意思。如果compared with要修饰Minivans，则compared with逗号前面应该是一个完整的分句（compare with的第二种用法），而D的前半句不是完整的一个分句，综合以上两点，D不对
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