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标题: OG12-123sc 请教了,多谢 [打印本页]

作者: annazyan    时间: 2012-5-16 07:13     标题: OG12-123sc 请教了,多谢

OG12123She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi neverthelessearned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.

A. She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to

B. Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to

C. Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in

D. Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to

答案C 无异议
我的问题是--OG说A,E的错误是run-on sentence。可是这个句子中的nevertheless 不是可以充当连词吗?为什么会有run-on之说呢?
作者: nadou2    时间: 2012-5-16 18:38

我也是过来请教的了。

















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作者: aeolusero二    时间: 2012-5-16 22:03

是不是因为A的话变成了两个独立的句子了?
作者: annazyan    时间: 2012-5-17 06:19

连词可以连接两个独立的句子啊
作者: season5924    时间: 2012-5-17 21:40

我是这么想的,nevertheless可以是副词也可以是连词
作连词的时候,一般放句首加逗号Nevertheless, access to education for rural and predominantly nomadic people in remote areas remains restricted.
作副词的时候放在句中But the win nevertheless continued Ireland's upward curve after their Grand Slam triumph last spring.
都是有道上的例句
作者: shell6688    时间: 2012-5-18 06:36

嗯。而且所有的语法、句子布局,说到底是和语义在相辅相成。

诚然,nevertheless是可以做连词。但是A、E的nevertheless都放在句子主语后面了。如果是连词,连接的是两个句子。而现在如此放置,恐怕不是很那么舒服吧~
作者: vespertine612    时间: 2012-5-18 20:49

D. Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to,为啥compared to 不对???
作者: vespertine612    时间: 2012-5-19 07:48

D中when compared to 没有错 但是句中已经有less作比较了( less必须和than固定搭配,而句中没有than) 也算是重复吧~




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