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标题: GWD-23-Q38讨论一下。 [打印本页]

作者: yuchendawn    时间: 2011-12-17 07:15     标题: GWD-23-Q38讨论一下。

Drawing on her roots in a society that has a strong tradition ofstory-telling and oral renditions of the past, Indian writer Suniti Namjoshiincorporates many types of literature into her writing: including historicaltexts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well asEuropean sources.




A.     writing: including historical texts, legends, and evennursery rhymes from both Indian as well as




B.     writing: historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymesfrom both Indian and




C.     writing: these include historical texts, legends, and evennursery rhymes from both Indian and




D.     writing, which includes historical texts, legends, and evennursery rhymes both from Indian as well as




E.      writing that includes historical texts, legends, and evennursery rhymes both from Indian and








我想问的是。C可以么。C错是因为these不能单独指代前面的东西么?因为我想these指代的是many types of




literature,因为今天早上才看了manhattan的书,说如果用冒号就要就近指代说明冒号后面的东西都是冒号前




面那个名词的。我就觉得前面writing是单数,后面怎么能举例那么多东西,肯定是说前面many types of




literature的。所以我就选了C。请大牛指教指教。谢谢拉



作者: Isabella1006    时间: 2011-12-18 06:46

我查了下,冒号后要紧跟解释的对象,所以these include多余了。
作者: yuchendawn    时间: 2011-12-18 21:11

所以说这里只是修饰writing而不是指前面的literature了是么?
作者: wyyavv    时间: 2011-12-19 06:31

不是的,是修饰many types of literature.因为冒号后面的解释并不一定是解释冒号前面的名词,也就是不一定要就近原则,如:Several friends have provided me with inspiration: Teresa, Jerry and Zero.
作者: yuchendawn    时间: 2011-12-20 06:41

Whatever needs explanation should be placed as close to the colon as possible.

Worse: Three factors affect the rate of a reaction: concentration. surface area and temperature.
Better:The rate of a reaction is affected by three factors: concentration. surface area. and temperature.

这个是manhattan里原版摘录出来的。。他说最好紧跟。那这道题是没办法做到完全紧跟所以只能退而求其次选一个相对分开的结构。但是其实还是用冒号表示literature的,对么。。=  =真是的。看来也不能完全相信manhattan




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