Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.
A.Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
B.Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies
C.The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
D.Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete
E.Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies 作者: luke-216 时间: 2011-9-20 21:31
这个不是一争议题么，不过好像更倾向B，说A的问题有more established
industries歧义和companies that compete的表述不清晰作者: coffee0921 时间: 2011-9-22 21:26
A is not parellel.... "whereas lines of competition blablablabla", should follow line of competition or something similar.作者: appleontree 时间: 2011-9-23 21:11
顺路问下whereas形式是不是不一定对等的
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