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标题: OG12-36疑惑 [打印本页]

作者: zhangluE 时间: 2010-8-28 17:05 标题: OG12-36疑惑

Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, THe first woman to draw a soldier's pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.
答案： A
   但我发现这 1)joined...2)was injured...3)was discharged..不是三个分句吗？那不是应该was injured 前也有and, 或者用Injured现在分词做短语吗
   我比较同意答案D: 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was 但OG说错误是injured时态错误。。这不可以是一次分词短语的形式么。。虽然D选项把had become 改成了was..大语法还是没有错的啊。。
   思来想去还是决定D比较对。。所以上来求解。。。

作者: banglixing 时间: 2010-8-28 21:33

IMO
并列的三个分句的话，只需要一个and
A,B and C 中间用逗号连接就可以了

我认为D的错误在于，DS这个人不是主动离开军队，而是因为受伤被迫离开的
D用了被动语态，所以欠妥

作者: banglixing 时间: 2010-8-28 21:33

如果连接两个以上词语，通常把AND放在最后一个词前面，是个习惯用法

作者: piacia 时间: 2010-9-2 06:29

我觉得还有一个地方是：injured必须要被动，是别人或别的东西让你受伤，而不是自己主动受伤，所以必须是 was injured. 如果按D那样作分词短语的话，要是 be injured xxx就对了。

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