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标题: og12-123 逗号不能连接2个从句? [打印本页]

作者: 静若水    时间: 2010-8-3 06:59     标题: og12-123 逗号不能连接2个从句?

123.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared toher native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi neverthelessearned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs wereeventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.

A. She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to


B. Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to


CLess successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in

D. Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to


E. She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in


答案C

OG对A为什么不对的解释中有一句是:a comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence.这怎么理解啊?


如果把A改为She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York than in这样句子对了吗?那这个逗号是不是就可以起到连接2个句子的作用了?

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作者: sunny9653    时间: 2010-8-4 06:33

逗号任何情况下都不能连接2个从句 得要连词的
改了也不对 因为没有连词
作者: shaoyipeng    时间: 2010-8-4 20:26

A:  She is less successful ..... , She earned .....

There are two independent sentences in A.  They are connected by a "," only.

This is called "run-on sentences" and is considered as a major grammar mistake.
作者: sumerlaws    时间: 2010-8-5 06:41

less ...+ than ....

错在less + compared to

A里面,用逗号连接两个独立的主谓句子(independent clauses ). 没有连词连接,错!
作者: 静若水    时间: 2010-8-5 20:30

明白了,多谢各位!!
作者: xiao19870205    时间: 2010-8-6 20:19

cooma  不能连接两个完整的句子,除非中间有连词
比较级和THAN 总是成对出现




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