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标题: TTGWD17-18 关于IN ADDITION TO [打印本页]

作者: DayDreamings 时间: 2010-8-1 08:32 标题: TTGWD17-18 关于IN ADDITION TO

TTGWD17-18

Q18:

Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

A Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

B Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.

C With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

D The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

E Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.

我想知道的是B 的IN ADDITION TO有没有错呢如果又是怎么错了呢

作者: painsper 时间: 2010-8-1 20:09

应该是 C 正确么？
B当中改变了句子重心，变成 a tripling was due to .... 强调了原因
而题干本意是强调 output tripled
另外，B中的 in addition to + n. 没错，不过tripling别扭。

A错在as a result of 和 because 重复
C也不尽完美，charcoal's being replaced不如the replacement of charcoal标准。
D错在前半句做原因状语，缺乏引导词with
E缺乏谓语。

综合考虑的话，我感觉C是比较正确的一个选项了。

作者: DayDreamings 时间: 2010-8-2 06:32

是A。。。他们说A AS A RESULT OF 和BECAUSE并列
我在想是不是IN ADDITION TO 表原因并列没有原句那么强烈

作者: linmeimei 时间: 2010-8-2 19:51

In addition to 没有表原因的意思只有“除...之外(还)”的意思！意思要做到平行结构自然而然就是选A了
另外开头是以类似Over the course of the eighteenth century短语作为开头的一般不用动它（自己的一点小感觉）
希望能够对你有帮助

作者: DayDreamings 时间: 2010-8-4 06:40

谢谢懂了

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