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标题: GWD2-39请教 [打印本页]

作者: 卮言浅夏    时间: 2010-6-7 06:52     标题: GWD2-39请教

Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to
cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing
the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more
localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and
unaffected areas of the skin.      

A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it

heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting      

B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and
stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized
response in the body, which results instead      

C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling
and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized
response in the body, one resulting


D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured
area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn
results
            

E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until

healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results

答案是D。请问E为什么不对?谢谢!

作者: 卮言浅夏    时间: 2010-6-7 22:31

不知道这两种用法是可以的吗?

1. until healing
2. Unlike A, instead, B ...


答案D里面it has healed用了完成时态,依据是什么呢?谢谢!
作者: stucashS    时间: 2010-6-8 06:51

ding!

对 这 题 D中 用 的 完 成 时 态 不 理 解 .

盼 NN来 指 点 迷 津 .
作者: fangzep    时间: 2010-6-9 06:48

in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
E答案不合理的地方一大堆.
首先healing的逻辑主语模糊,时态也不对;
其次unlike..., instead,...这样的用法就很不合逻辑;
最后the body's more...和the body's inflammatory对不上.
作者: anserrr    时间: 2010-6-10 06:55

the body’s more localized response 和the body’s inflammatory response完全对的上,不明白LS所言。
作者: xiangrui    时间: 2010-6-11 06:55

没什么对不上的呀,我觉得对的挺好的~
作者: stucashS    时间: 2010-6-12 06:42

unlike 和 instead 好象重复了吧
作者: toneere    时间: 2010-6-13 06:49

My answer is D

resulting- wrong verb tense - eliminates A,C

E - instead [redundant use of Unlike, already being used for contrast]

B - which cannot modify body

Hope this helps...




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