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标题: 【诚心求教】白勇一道题 [打印本页]

作者: haihngm    时间: 2009-7-19 07:25     标题: 【诚心求教】白勇一道题

According to a panel of health officials, there has been a great deal of confusion in the medical profession about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to health.

A about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to

B with respect to obesity being a biological disorder posing serious health risks or if it is related more to appearance than 

C over whether or not obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition more related to appearance than to

D about obesity and if it is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to

E concerning whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition more related to appearance than

答案是A,如果是A,不就是介词about 后跟一个句子了嘛?是这个句子做宾语?


作者: gifiler    时间: 2009-7-19 20:15

about后面接一个whether...or...引导的从句做宾语confusion的补足语,表是否怎么样.
作者: reginaer    时间: 2009-7-20 06:46

通过比较选项,只有A最好了。


作者: vincentwh    时间: 2009-7-21 06:47

E为何不可呢?

感觉A的whether。。。or不对称啊,而且最后一个to似乎不必要?


作者: wumeier    时间: 2009-7-21 20:38

我觉得还是A好些吧,

与E的比较:concerning whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition more related to appearance than

首先,“it is”没必要再重复了吧,已经很明确了

然后,“to”应该还是需要的,否则感觉语义读上去不是很明了,而且有与“related”比较的错觉

另外,有一点,希望大家指点啊~白勇上好像说过,标准书面语倾向于用about,而不使用concerning,很久没看这本书了,所以我暂时只找到了一个例子,也不知道可不可行,请大家拍砖啊~

The current administration ,being worried over some foreign trade barries being removed and our exports failing to increase as a result of deep cuts in the value of the dollar ,has formed a group to study ways to sharpen our competivities.

它的正确选项是:worried about the removal of some foreign trade barries and the failure of our exports

另一错误选项是:because of its worry corcerning the removal of some foreign trade barries ,also concerning the failure of our exports 

虽然,这个点,不是这个句子的致命伤,但BY明确说了这个点


作者: audiencer    时间: 2009-7-22 06:38

是的,一般不用concerning .





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