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作者: dhhgh11    时间: 2004-8-11 06:43     标题: 大全784

The nation’s three military academies have seen a dramatic rise in applications, one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies.

(A) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies

(B) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs that have increased at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting

(C) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, private colleges that increased their tuition costs, and recruiting improvements by the academies

(D) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs increasing at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting(A)

(E) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting

请问各位牛牛,为什么选A,考点是什么?我做到第三遍还是觉得B好,郁闷!

先在这谢谢各位了。
作者: jhiiool    时间: 2004-8-11 06:45

平行结构

B错在 1. tuition costs that have increased at private colleges 不简洁 2. academies improving their recruiting 与前面的结构不平行.


作者: mjiirggh    时间: 2004-8-11 06:45

这题的考点很清楚,对称:形式对称 + 含义对称 ,形式对称是指:都得是名词短语,含义对称则指:都得是表动态名词短语。

考点虽很清楚,但我做了两次也是错,我的迷惑是:到底怎么判定increasing tuition costs 和 academies improving their recruiting,谁是名词短语,谁是分词?请NN 指导。






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