The nation’s three military academies have seen a dramatic rise in applications, one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies.
(A) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies
(B) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs that have increased at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting
(C) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, private colleges that increased their tuition costs, and recruiting improvements by the academies
(D) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs increasing at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting(A)
(E) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting
请问各位牛牛,为什么选A,考点是什么?我做到第三遍还是觉得B好,郁闷!先在这谢谢各位了。作者: jhiiool 时间: 2004-8-11 06:45
平行结构B错在
1. tuition costs that have increased at private colleges 不简洁
2. academies improving their recruiting 与前面的结构不平行.作者: mjiirggh 时间: 2004-8-11 06:45