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作者: susenmay    时间: 2008-1-13 06:46     标题: Prep 7

7.  Each year companies in the United State could save as much as $58 billion annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided offices with cleaner air.

 A. annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided

B. annually if they prevented employee illness and gain as much as $200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing

C.  annually in employee illness prevention and gain as much as $200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing

D. in employee illness prevention and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided

E. by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improved worker performance if they simply provided

答案选E。但大家觉得E中这两块对称吗 ?


作者: kjhggsdf    时间: 2008-1-13 20:24

OG里面有讲到,只要有annually 就不能有 each year, 秒杀 A,B,C

E选项里面
个人理解是
save as much as $58 billion 和后面的gain as much as $200 billion的主干意思是平行了
那一个是by .....   另外一个是through ....这两个省略号里面的内容就没有必要一定是完全平行了吧

NN拍砖啊

作者: susenmay    时间: 2008-1-14 07:07

我觉得E选项中,by后边是动宾结构,而through后边是名词短语,显然并非最佳答案。可能指

示比较下来较好的答案。如果改成by preventing illness among employees

and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if

they simply provided 应该就更好了。大家同意吗 ?


作者: EagerBeaver    时间: 2008-1-14 19:13

同意阿
作者: waterpoo    时间: 2008-1-15 06:24

没有人认为they的指代会有歧义吗?
作者: summervivien    时间: 2008-1-16 07:05

楼上一语惊四座,they,可以指workers,也可以指本句主语
作者: lonelyplanet    时间: 2008-1-18 06:44

这个问题不会存在阿,之前的除了employees是复数就是companies是复数了,前者很明显不适中心词,代词怎么会睬他?  所以就是指代后者阿

E还有两个好处,1.动词形式优于抽象名词    2.-ed分词优于-ing分词






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