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作者: Rachmaninoff    时间: 2007-7-24 07:14     标题: 迷惑了: gwd30-5

Q5:

Citing the recent increase in earnings by several computer companies, economists feel that a cycle has begun in which personal computer users, especially corporate consumers, are replacing their PC’s with more powerful models.

  1. a cycle has begun in which personal computer users
  2. a cycle for personal computer users has begun in which they
  3. there is a cycle beginning for personal computer users
  4. it is the beginning of a cycle for personal computer users
  5. personal computer users are in the beginning of a cycle when they

答案是a,第一遍是做对了的,现在却怎么也想不通,in which在句中做什么成份,是引导定语从句跳跃修饰cycle吗?还是相当于when引导状语从句?

另外,e为什么不对呢?语法上好像没什么毛病啊,是因为改变句意吗?

盼指点!!


作者: philikittists    时间: 2007-7-24 13:32

which refers to "cycle".在从句中作状语,in the cycle ..users...are replaceing their PCs...

in which 从句避免头重脚轻,所以滞后。

e逻辑意思错!人是一个周期的开始!

What's more, the pronoun "they" does not have a clear antecedent.

指代经济学家还是个人电脑用户,但这点我也不是很肯定,,,

Open to discuss


作者: CasualWalker    时间: 2007-7-24 18:32

看a和e,economists feel 的当然是cycle,而不是pc user,语义重心应在cycle所以在前。另外,a简洁,而且不存在they的指戴不明错误概率,所以当然选a.
作者: dabiaoxun    时间: 2007-7-25 14:10

in which可以用that来代替一下,因为从句太长,因此将动词提前。in which指代cycle

E:personal computer users are in the beginning of a cycle when they。

1.in the beginning of ?应该是at

2.cycle不能理解,什么cycle,是时间?事件?还是命运。后面直接结了when引导的时间状语从句,整句顺序错误,且意思不明确。


作者: Rachmaninoff    时间: 2007-7-25 18:56

明白了!谢谢楼上各位!

对跳跃修饰的问题总是拿不准啊


作者: lingri88    时间: 2007-7-27 06:36

那么b有什么错误吗?

A. a cycle has begun in which personal computer users

B. a cycle for personal computer users has begun in which they


我觉得在A中,后面的their 很明显是指代 PC.users的,而在b中用they 代替了,可能会造成指代不清的问题,有可能指代economists,是不是这样?


作者: angelavivi    时间: 2007-8-1 06:33

b的主谓语分开了,arkward.




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