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老prep 18 go答案e选项 that指代问题

[OG原题,OG10-249]Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal stylewere influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of


答案是b, 我可以理解。不过,对e 的解释中,In E, the construction different from that of his own is confusing since there is no referent for that: different from his own makes a logical comparison.  


为什么说that 没有指代呢? 不是指代前面的music 吗?


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og解释的意思应该是:from that of,应该是别的音乐家和自己的音乐进行比较,his own已经表示自己的音乐了,再用that多余了,你看他用的冒号,there is no referent for that: different from his own makes a logical comparison.  说明后句解释了为什么no referent,是因为his own已经logical占了位置,那么that 就无合理的referent了

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所以,这个其实并不在于指代不清,而是在于 that of his own 意思重复。 对吗?

谢谢!!

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对滴。。。。。。。。

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非常谢谢你!!

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