OG 71

lololo

71. The original building and loan associations were organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.

(A) subscriptions, then taking turns drawing

(B) subscriptions, and then taking turns drawing

(C)subscriptions and then took turns drawing

(D) subscriptions and then took turns, they drew

(E) subscriptions and then drew, taking turns

答案是C没有问题。我的问题是有关and, then. 如果把C得答案改成subscriptions, then took turns drawing，中间没有and, 多加一个逗号，是否可以？我是想弄明白then是否可以连接句子, and then 一起用是否wordy.

谢谢先！

himba

then是副词，一般不能作连词用，and then比较好，但是记得以前好像看到过一题用then来连接句子得。反正and then不累赘，而且很标准。