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OG13 The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of

热1shelly1214 2013-01-24 10:57

The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,”a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a

(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a

(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of

(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

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beyondgmatqin 2013-01-25 13:21

标准答案是A，
题目释义： "essay on heat and light"，a critique of…as well as a vision of…
考点
句子结构（grammatical construction）平行结构（parallelism）逻辑意思（logical prediction）
1) 同位语
同位语结构的形式: (参考白勇语法)
名词性同位语, 名词解释名词:n. , n. ; n. , a/an + n.或 a/an + n. , n.
that引导同位语结构:抽象名词(evidence, result, principle等等) + that从句, that从句对抽象名词进行具体化解释
概括性同位语结构:用一个概括性的名词去概括前面的解释对象;短语/句子, a program/ an advance/ a practice that…
名词重复性同位语结构:
n. , n.(重复所修饰的名词) + that…或 n. , the same n.(重复所修饰的名词) that…
2) as well as前后对称，并且应当注意的是在A as well as B的用法中，强调的是A。
选项分析
A. correct。a critique是"essay on heat and light"的同位语；a critique和a vision在as well as前后对称。
B. envisioning有具体的名词形式即vision，应直接用名词；his指代不清。
C. and…as well混搭错误；envisioning有具体的名词形式即vision，应直接用名词。
D. critiquing做伴随状语修饰前面分句错误；critiquing和a vision在and also前后不对称。From…forward不简洁，不如直接用since。
E. done多余；envisioning错误同B；his own改变句意；all the chemistry和his own envisioning的对称使得Davy批判的是他自己；
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shelly1214 2013-01-25 13:51

很仔细呀，灰常感谢！！